Friday, January 17, 2020

St Kabeer's Couplets 5: When Season Comes, Come Fruits Comments

Rating: 5.0

Slowly, O thou fleeting mind,
Slowly the ways of world wind;
You may pour down plenty a pot,
Season comes come fruits on the dot.
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 17 January 2020

A wonderful and well composed quatrain. Patience is a great attribute that will ensure one to success. A great poem with insight and wisdom.

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Aniruddha Pathak 17 January 2020

I'm pleased, appreciation has come from right quarters. Thank you so much.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 17 January 2020

A brilliant poem that emphasizes the importance of patience in life! A precious quatrain sir.................10

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Aniruddha Pathak 17 January 2020

In this rat-race world, patience has become dearer. Thanks for the feedback/rating.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 17 January 2020

nice I have known many who have just no patience some are patients of patience in an earthly demo to aliens they asked where is the kid we produced instantly in our domain we have to 9 months remain LOL LAUGHED THE ALIEN Then what was the hurry for towards the end

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Aniruddha Pathak 17 January 2020

'Some are patients of patience'. I liked this expression. ...and yes I've heard about this joke. It is our habit. We hurry up frantically to reach anywhere, and then stretch our feet on an easy chair and while away the time. Thanks PP for visiting. Incidentally, 'nice' is often used as a pejorative.

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