Sunday, February 16, 2020

St Kabeer's Couplets 18: Caught In Greed's Glue Clout Comments

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Fluttering wings and greed weary,
Poor fly is stuck in jaggery,
Caught in greed's gluey clout,
Struggling hard to get out,
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Mahtab Bangalee 20 February 2020

yeah right the greed the covetous mind locks us in the puzzling illusion of colorful world if we avoid the self greed then we can save ourselves

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 16 February 2020

A superb Quatrain with brilliant thoughts. So very true. Greed is a sin that can take us to darkness. Great imagery and rhyme. On to my Poem List.

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Aniruddha Pathak 16 February 2020

Thanks dear poet, but I feel a bit uncomfortable in that I usurp all the credit for the brilliance of the original poet.

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