Thursday, August 7, 2008

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Slowly, softly, silently stalking
Stepping, slinking, squeezingpastthe
Shining, shimmering, scintillating
Bars of gold that threaten to
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Martin O'Neill
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Christina Simmons 31 January 2017

Such imagination was used to describe this poem: by the time finished reading it I wasn't sure whether to laugh or cry - burst into tears? ? ? Congratulation for being recognise for the day!

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Clarence Prince 31 January 2017

A moment of lost concentration Stopping, Settling, Sleeping. All that said a lot!

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Anil Kumar Panda 31 January 2017

Interesting poem. Enjoyed reading.

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Tom Allport 31 January 2017

a nicely observed poem of catty antics.

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Indira Renganathan 31 January 2017

Very very interesting poem....congratulations on poet of the day

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Kumarmani Mahakul 31 January 2017

We often see cat playing in sunshine. Moment of lost concentration is regained again. Slowly, softly and silently everything is stalking here. An interesting poem is shared and this is amazing...10..Congratulations!

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Edward Kofi Louis 31 January 2017

Stopped. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Richard Wlodarski 31 January 2017

Something a little different. And breezy. And fun. Congrats on the cat becoming Poem Of The Day.

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Geoffrey Fafard 31 January 2017

Positively purring poem Martin…I like it.Don't wake the cat….!

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Bernard F. Asuncion 31 January 2017

Interesting to read..... congrats on being chosen😄😄😄

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Patti Masterman 20 April 2010

Love this. Cats seem like such naive newcomers in some ways, fierce hunters though they may be.

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Jacqui Thewless 13 July 2009

Last two lines: brill!

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Frank Cannon 12 August 2008

After a good feed of pigeon no doubt! !

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