Saturday, December 26, 2009

Squeaky Armour Comments

Rating: 5.0

Shoes with whistle, I still remember,
Guarded my feet like a squeaking armour;
Every step applauds with squeaks,
And showered kisses on the cheeks.
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Ranjit Ravindran
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Pradyumna Jyotir 14 January 2010

The poem is very sweet. It brought back memories of my childhood...when life was so carefree and joyous

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Marilyn Lott 09 January 2010

What sweet thoughts of an adorable little boy. Our memories are special treasures, especially of a happy childhood. '10! ' for you Ranjit. Warm Wishes, Marilyn

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Indira Renganathan 09 January 2010

Why no new poems? ......

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Diane Violet 31 December 2009

a very sweet memory and write

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Indira Renganathan 30 December 2009

Childhood flavour down the memory lane is ever significant...yours is no exemption...nice write indeed

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Nalini Hebbar 27 December 2009

very nice...these shoes are a big hit with kids and their parents...great walk down the memory lane

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Mamta Agarwal 27 December 2009

Ranjit, am so happy the haiku brought back joyous memories of childhood. you capture and relive your joy with good imagery. Happy new year Mamta

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