Saturday, September 17, 2011

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Close to my heart,
There is an empty space.
Waiting for your return,
So that you may fill it.
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Stefanie Fontker
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Patti Masterman 17 September 2011

Nice job, Stefanie. The first lines really draw the reader into the poem.

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Dave Walker 17 September 2011

Very good poem, and very good point. Its very hard to replace your one true love.

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Sam Varghis 17 September 2011

Dont allow any unlawful residents in your heart. Dont keep it empty fill it with his living memories, Nice poem, Sam

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