Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Kim Barney
I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Sunday, November 7, 2021

Square Poems 43: Whale Acrostic Comments

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Whoa! That's one big dude!
He weighs thirty tons!
And has two blowholes.
Leave that guy alone!
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Dr Dillip K Swain 24 December 2021

Happy Christmas dear poet

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Kim Barney 28 December 2021

Thank you, Dillip. Happy Christmas and a Healthy New Year to you also!

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Bri Edwards 24 December 2021

Give me a round poem any day! ! ! ! I rode a grey whale once; it was a pussycat.

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Kim Barney 28 December 2021

OK, Br, I invented the square poem; now it's your turn to invent the round one! Oh, never mind; I have an idea about that already!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 19 November 2021

An informative write presented in an interesting poetic form. Well crafted.

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Kim Barney 28 December 2021

Thank you very much, Rose Marie!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 07 November 2021

Very interestingly explained this Acrostic format called Square poems 43. Bravo, Kim!

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Kim Barney 28 December 2021

Thank you, Sylvia!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 07 November 2021

In Nederland we have a fish called Zeeduivel, translated into English as Seadevil. Not such big kind as your Devil Fish, but a very tasteful fish to eat

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Kim Barney 28 December 2021

Thank you for the comment, Sylvia!

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I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
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I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
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