Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Kim Barney
I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Monday, November 14, 2016

Square Poems 05: Runaway Geraniums Comments

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I mowed my lawn today for the last time
this year (I think) . The weather has been warm.
Here it is the middle of November
and my tomatoes are still producing!
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Spock The Vegan 19 November 2016

Great poem, however I checked the syllable count on my counter, and it shows line 4 and 8 with 11. It's wrong about line 4, giving 4 syllables to tomatoes, but seems to be right on line 8. Check it out.

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Kim Barney 19 November 2016

It's wrong about line eight also. Here in Utah we pronounce 'lobelia' with just three syllables, not four. loh-BEEL-yuh and if you look on dictionary.com they agree with me. Check it out.

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Wes Vogler 25 November 2016

fingers make a great syllable counter and it keeps you young (and human)

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Tom Billsborough 17 November 2016

Lovely picture. One year I left my geraniums out a day too late. Disaster. A great flower, though and easy to propogate. We get oddly mild winters here. Gulf Stream and we're near the coast. A really good poem.

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Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Kim Barney
I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
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