Thursday, December 8, 2016

Square Poem 01 - Dante Comments

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Dante

hell is a choice we avoid
is sure fire words still burning
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Wes Vogler 10 December 2016

Hey mister Soos (hereinafter addressed as Rich) I like it. As it happens I have been a Lewis Carroll collector for over fifty years. Diagonal is tricky. Nice.job

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R Soos 10 December 2016

Thank you! =: -) ..

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Kim Barney 08 December 2016

Very clever. A different take on the square poem than mine, where you count words instead of syllables, but your. poem also reads the same down word by word as it does across. Mine don't do that.

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