~ Spurned Love ~ Comments

Who can deny love of any one, not even god. spurned love is more gleaming.

Liquid dusk Drops Droops Troops Props Soothe Emollient Salve me. These words are almost musical, they just dance off your tongue as you read them and just reinforces the who poem. So imaginative and so to the point. Great write and which I had you talent for words.

I understand it was hot love, now you favour something softer.(thank you for your lovely comments)

Liquid dusk Drops Droops Troops Props Soothe Emollient Salve me. sweet terms and the stanza is sweet and meaningful..some philosophical touches are there..well done

Solid sun rays Hurt me. Liquid dusk Drops. yes soldid sun rays hurt as the love hurts.. but it is blissful too. some thig may hhappend good to you.. nice feeling...10 i loved it and its feeling

Amazing… romance with spurned Love… Indeed beautiful concept …where jilt is there Love still exists…here the full and… floridness is exemplary… 10++

I love your words, they are explicit and to the point. Good Write. A ten. Lynn

Spurned Love is painfully beautiful you...one thing I say Niv, you have strong hold on your words and boldly order them around in the manner in which you want...I like your style, too. a 10+++

Purned love or solid sun rays, I go for solid sun rays, say what ever you want, The queen of dusk must not hide.10 for the nrrative, and how 'trooops' with 'props' are emollient? You go by the sound of some words.

Liquid dusk Drops Droops Troops Props Soothe Emollient Salve me.. if love is spurned it can enslave us.. sun rays do harms us but give protection n energy too... lovely piece of writng and careful placement of words...10 read mine real reflection... dalai-path to success

Indeed beautiful…and caught the imagination and expression is alike

Personal feel. Personal account. Nature can give us hotness and solace in this way. Nice verses.

Of course spurned love hurts you more than the solid sun rays. You go blind with rage...this is but logical. Cheers

a remedial piece, passionate!

This poem has segued me. Let us shun Sun God. To Dusk Queen glittering Ten+++ Dr. V.

You write with a passion that captures moments and feelings.

Solid sun rays hurt me...Truely very poetic & beautiful.

Solid sun rays Hurt me. these lines tell a lot. nice shan

Solid sun rays Hurt me. these lines tell a lot. nice shan

Solid sun rays Hurt me. these lines tell a lot. nice shan