~ Spurned Love ~ Poem by MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK.

Emotion is abyssal. Love [both jocund and jilted] Eden is Abyss. Symbolically Poet used abyss to reside and enjoy joy of jilt in niched arena of mind. Indeed best asylum for Spurned Lovers. WR

Finest expression of hurt heart! Lingeringness and clinginess to LOVE! ! Wow! ! ! Ten++ for Spurned Lovers. PO PO

Amazing… romance with spurned Love… Indeed beautiful concept …where jilt is there Love still exists…here the full and… floridness is exemplary… 10++

I love your words, they are explicit and to the point. Good Write. A ten. Lynn

Spurned Love is painfully beautiful you...one thing I say Niv, you have strong hold on your words and boldly order them around in the manner in which you want...I like your style, too. a 10+++

Who can deny love of any one, not even god. spurned love is more gleaming.

Liquid dusk Drops Droops Troops Props Soothe Emollient Salve me. These words are almost musical, they just dance off your tongue as you read them and just reinforces the who poem. So imaginative and so to the point. Great write and which I had you talent for words.

I understand it was hot love, now you favour something softer.(thank you for your lovely comments)

Liquid dusk Drops Droops Troops Props Soothe Emollient Salve me. sweet terms and the stanza is sweet and meaningful..some philosophical touches are there..well done

Solid sun rays Hurt me. Liquid dusk Drops. yes soldid sun rays hurt as the love hurts.. but it is blissful too. some thig may hhappend good to you.. nice feeling...10 i loved it and its feeling