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I can't dig checker patterns, just never been my style of clothing haha. But man, in all seriousness this is another really good one. Write on!

Beware the drink man! I reall liked this one too

Can resonate with this flow of consciousness- the checked shirt a moment observed becomes the metaphor and flows into the glass- feel the thinking at work -thanks

First: love the title! Second is I love the poem. It moves along calmly until you put in one of your Jonny-isms about the animals that look like curious women, and this takes it to that new level! ! ! Just that line elevates the poem from good to great. I like the checkered shirt too. Scotty loves aything visual Did I just go 3rd person? Hell yes I did! Good one Jon! S