Sunday, January 13, 2019

Spry Spy Is In Dry Cry Comments

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For collecting information
From an enemy or competitor,
A spry spy is engaged by himself,
He observes that everything is right,
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Kumarmani Mahakul
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Mj Lemon 15 August 2019

The alliteration gives this verse an almost fairy-tale quality. But behind that there is a profound lesson about the toxic nature of the spirit that covets. A great verse, Kumarmani. This one goes to myfavourites.

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Edward Kofi Louis 21 January 2019

Jealousy and anger helps the Wings of Satan! ! ! We rather need righteous morals. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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M Asim Nehal 14 January 2019

Fantastic poem....I liked the closing lines: Roaring cloud does not rain at all, Fighting goats do not thrash heads deeply, Spry spy cries dry cry and hides soon.

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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