Sunday, October 4, 2020

Sprouts Comments

Rating: 5.0

My seeds sown in their garden
grew and multiplied
in the papers.
In reality they were shrinking
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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh
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Unnikrishnan E S 27 February 2022

Impressive. Seeds sprout when sown in a bed and watered. But to grow and flower, they need something more than food (in the form of manure) . They need the sunlight of love… Have you given them that, dear poet? 5*s

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Unwritten Soul 18 October 2020

It left me something to think, i guess the poem sprout my interest.

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M Asim Nehal 08 October 2020

Many a thing we do for others without expecting any rewards and it comes back to us in some or the other form. Profound Poem 10**

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Unwritten Soul 05 October 2020

They grown but not to feed u, to feed others... But surely some will come for you from your work or from others. I heard...Life and balance are twins. So keep it up any venture u want to invest.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 05 October 2020

A well penned poem. Truly impressive...5 stars*****

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