Saturday, October 10, 2020

Springtime Comments

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Sit silent, feel the sun's warmth
Upon the skin, and in the blood.
An orange glow behind the eyelids.
A breeze tickling shoulder skin
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Paul T P Burne
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Terry Craddock 30 October 2020

Welcome Spring Warmth In Soft Silence take time to welcome warmth time rush soft lost in silence embracing the sense of touch feeling the warmth the sun a tease tickling breeze on skin through soft lid closed eyes this is the place many of us have enjoyed when greeting warmer weather in spring Inspired by the poem 'Springtime' by the poet Paul T P Burne. Dedicated to the poet Paul T P Burne.

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Terry Craddock 18 October 2020

A beautiful poem embracing the sense of touch, feeling the warmth of sun and a tickling breeze on skin, through closed eyes, a place many of us have enjoyed when greeting warmer weather in spring.

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Yiyan Han 16 October 2020

Amazing, warm spring sun

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Suresh Kumar Ek 11 October 2020

A meditative poem. Good work Paul Keep on writing. You have the talent

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