Sunday, August 19, 2012

Springtime Comments

Rating: 5.0

The soft grass dampened by the dew
Forget-me-nots around my feet
Above my head the songbirds flew
Hear them whistle twitter and tweet
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bilbo reid
COMMENTS
Valerie Dohren 22 August 2012

Simply beautiful bilbo, the imagery is fantastic such that I can virtually feel that breeze and smell the roses.

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Heather Wilson 20 August 2012

A wonderful write, Mother nature knows her stuff, -living in the depth of the country I get to enjoy much of it, A poem to return to at a later date for another read., thank you.

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Joseph Anderson 20 August 2012

The beauty and joys of natural laid out in a sweetly flowing, well cadenced poem. This is my type of poetry. A great write and a joy to read

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