Friday, July 17, 2009

Springtime Comments

Rating: 2.5

Spring time is fun time!
go to the park
the dogs bark!
flowers bloom
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Kait Bebelheimer
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Khairul Ahsan 20 April 2015

It's a nice, short poem. The vibes of the Spring can be felt in the poem. 'flowers bloom the bugs do too! ' - wonderful comparison of the 'blooming' of the two.

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Barbara Terry 17 July 2009

I'm for it! Nicely written Kait, and I love the spring and summer months. A 10+++++ Love & hugs, Barbara

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