Tuesday, March 17, 2015

Springs Athletic Rise Comments

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Spring glides briskly like a sprinter
But she wont stride,
until theres a March
to parade along the equinox
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Kevin Patrick
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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 23 March 2015

Woah mindblowing way to personify. Poets are all married to nature it seems. In some lines the diction choice was awesome here, in others the phrasing. Great to read u again. Cheers.

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