Tuesday, September 1, 2009

! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Spring Stayed Back For Ever With Gentle Breeze! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Comments

Rating: 2.4

You knocked
At midnight,
How come you are awake;
Didn't you get your supplies?
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Mamta Agarwal
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Anand Madhukar 11 September 2009

A beautiful dedication.

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Vaibhav Pandey 06 September 2009

a very lovely poem ma'm.... a pleasure to read...10

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Sarwar Chowdhury 05 September 2009

Oh, wait a while, But thanks for reminding me. Before I knew Room was full Of bouquets of blooms In every tint and hue. Ammmmmmazing imageries created dear Mamtaji! Oh breeze! and indeed, remarkable is interlink between spring and the son! great accomplishment! 1010101010!

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Rakesh Bedi 01 September 2009

Unfergettable is the momemt for anyone when life promotes one to a parent! A lovelypoem, mamta!

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Mark Nwagwu 01 September 2009

This poem is written for my son, who was born in spring. Wecall him Sameer, which means gentle breeze. You won't believe this, Mamta, but it was the last lines that moved me so much - the beat therein. Indeed your son was not just born in spring, He is spring - freshness, blossoms, beauty, joy - no pain. And the poem itself is all softness and serenity. Thanks, Mamta, thanks mark

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Sandra Martyres 01 September 2009

Beautiful imagery in this poem Mamta...the arrival of spring co-inciding with the birth of your son....

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