Tuesday, April 8, 2014

Spring Season Comments

Rating: 4.5

Spring blossoms extending essential spumes
Gray liberates blue skies to fluffy hue
Midnight tickles with sparkling droplets
Crickets play opus capturing melody
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Khairul Ahsan 14 December 2018

The last stanza is superb: 'Eternity broadens touching universe afar Void is merely daunting creative thought Oceans waves by rhythmic revolutions Equidistant crests with heated sun Moon and stars dance beyond enormity'.

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Suman Kumar Das 08 April 2014

Wonderful write, Dear! ..................nicely crafted..............liked it

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