Spring On Cape Cod Comments

The setting sun beholds the beauty and allows us to grow. The sand beneath your feet is damp. Worries are drifted. I this shore you sit alone and perceive wonderful sea. This poem is excellently penned.10

'I let my worries drift off into space. I take a cue from all around this place - To let my worries drift off into space, I came alone to sit upon this shore.' These lines kindle my thoughts of my teen age days, when I used to sit alone on the seashore, to forget my worries and enjoy the beauties of the naked sea with its roaring waves near the shore, and its calmness at the horizan. You have an excellent way of expressing your feelings and I like this poem very much. Please see my poem 'The Unfathomable Ocean' in this website, which I wrote to repay my debt to the Ocean.

By all means, quite lovely.

What a beautiful poem Bobbie Ann! You've described this so nicely.........great poem. Sincerely, Mary

I think it's good that, not only can you can use this rhyme scheme with such ease but thatyou can fill it with the right content. The repetition added to the sense of calm serenitythat you were describing whilst it also gave the impression of a single moment.