Tuesday, December 4, 2007

Spring Offering Comments

Rating: 5.0

The sun lingers languidly
On roof tops and trees
The air buzzes busily
With birds and the bees
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leonard daranjo
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Marvin Brato 12 December 2007

So vivid realistic, I could see it in my eyes and feel its life! A 10 sir.

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Love Poetry Hate Racism 04 December 2007

simplistically superb..

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Sandra Fowler 04 December 2007

The beautiful imagery of spring. Your eloquence sings, Leonard. Fine work as always. Warmest regards, Sandra

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