Tuesday, May 23, 2017

Spring Of Desires! Comments

Rating: 4.8

Spring adorned desires
When drizzled in rainbow colours
Pearls blossomed in bewitching hour
While breaths bathed in dews.
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Geetha Jayakumar
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Khairul Ahsan 29 April 2020

'One beautiful face rose up From the crystalline stream Just one face, grasped my memories! ' - That's a wonderful expression Geetha, very evocative. Loved this short poem.

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Jazib Kamalvi 11 September 2017

An impressive heart crushing and animated image is emerging slowly. A nice poetic imagination, Geetha. Thank you very much.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 09 September 2017

A petal from rosy memories says the poem I felt the poem is a pearl from the memory of shells.

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Hello Geetha, So beautifully penned with exquisite imagery. One beautiful face rose up from the crystalline stream. Wish i knew whose beautiful face it was! ! ! :) Lovely poem

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Impressive work...Virtually flawless stanzaic structure moves with the glide of a shiny new coin tossed across a freshly glaced ice-pond...Stellar crafting & imagescape, indeed. ~FjR~

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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 May 2017

Rainbow colours are drizzled with vibrations of mind in this spring. Pearls blossomed in every hours as expression witnesses the imagery. Spring has dripped down nectar with sweetness of beautiful breeze. From crystalline stream beauty revives to rise. An interesting and excellent poem is shared here.10

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The origin of the beautiful face so wonderfully described.

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Nice to dream, Like a cream. Wondering the practical experience.thank you

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Sekharan Pookkat 26 May 2017

crystals are clear memories are dear dews are near restore it again

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Valsa George 26 May 2017

One beautiful face rose up From the crystalline stream Just one face, grasped my memories! This indeed beautiful Geetha....! Lovely words couched in the fervent emotion of love!

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Geetha Jayakumar 26 May 2017

Thank you Valsa.

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Akhtar Jawad 25 May 2017

A lovely poem I was enchanted with its beauty.

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Geetha Jayakumar 26 May 2017

Thank you Akhtarji

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Susan Williams 24 May 2017

Lovely! - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Nectar dripped from the lips While I plucked a petal From the rosy memories- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - I found these lines so particularly charming and alluring, Geetha. It is one of the joys in reading poetry to come across such fresh and evocative images and I thank you so much for sharing them.....10+++++ on this Spring of Desires

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Geetha Jayakumar 26 May 2017

Thank you Susan for the beautiful comment.

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