Monday, May 9, 2016

Spring Magic. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Cotton, floating on the breeze,
falling, gently in the air;
'neath a canopy of trees,
in skies so blue and bare.
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dave lessard
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Lorraine Colon 15 May 2016

Communing with Nature is the most delightful way to bring a fresh perspective to our life. We find solutions to our problems and we find the strength to act on them. A walk with Nature can indeed make us whole again. A most inspiring poem. Easy to read, but very effective.

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Pamela Sinicrope 09 May 2016

You've captured the lighthearted hopeful nature of spring in this writing. The clipped and quick rhyme scheme moves like the spores in the breeze. Beautiful imagery! Thanks for sharing.

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