Wednesday, February 1, 2012

Spring Lilacs Comments

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Eyewitness of nature’s loom
When lilacs with long
Locks of blooms
Illumine my kitchen counter
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Duane Botzek
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Adeline Foster 24 July 2012

Hey, that's good, and from a male point of view, excellent. Read mine - Hand Haying - Adeline

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Aleksandra Szymanska 01 February 2012

Personally I associate purple with lavender - this is my favourite one... For some reason I find the word 'lilac' to be an annoying onomatopoeia, but your poem is very beautiful. I love the visuals, I love its scent... Thank you for sharing...

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