Spring's red comes after a long winter's blue,
With a message to all mankind: Let go,
Forget the past to forge ahead and grow,
To life when comes the life as if born new.
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A wonderful Sonnet with a great message! The last fabulous! Loved reading this message yielding beautiful poem!
Feedback always inspires man to move forward, and knowledgeable feedback more so. PH i believe is not a platform to criticise, but encourage poets. I am with it, but still I feel creative comments do have a place in taking to the next level. Any way, insofar as I'm concerned, I'd always welcome such comments. So, you may feel free, if you've one.
Seasons change and new seasons come. Spring is king of all seasons. But spring lasts for only two months and goes away. In this season we gather many memories. We witness green life under greater arch. An interesting poem is very well penned.10
Thank you Kumarmani, you are spot on.