During the spring in my riverine country
Green is every big and small tree,
Soft is every blade of grasses on soil
Cute is every mole and hill;
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Spring is wonderfully and practically pictured here in this great poem, I have read it in many times, every times got much touch of my native as well, thanks for such a great poem
Birds will sing for them Sweetly without any chorus, West wind will enchant them Randomly blowing in spring tunes; , ....... outstanding but true in fact, thanks for this great poem
Spring in my native is a pictorial romantic kind to me, methink go to visit the place, great creation, love it,10
(continued) ..... i, too, like the photo. who is the handsome fellow? anybody we know? your title sounds (to me) as though it is missing a word after Native. perhaps it is a use of native i am not familiar with, but i would add Land or Country. ;) i would like to know what you are referring to by Love and them. the scene is very attracting. i especially enjoyed the last stanza, particularly the come dear. :) bri
Dear poet, in the photo you can see me, this photograph has been taken just before the day the poem was composed was 3/3/2018, I am around 40, thank you for praising me; Well, sir, native will refer here country, Sir, in the last stanza my native is personified, Thank you again dear great friend Bri Edwards; I have used here great before friend is to show honor, Yes, please, sir, continue; you are really a great critic; I love and respect you
Anyone can draw its features; ......its refers to love or nature? Bees and butterflies will attract them ....IF them refers to flowers, i would type Bees and butterflies (will be) attracted to them...BUT i think perhaps both thems may refer to love or lovers? ? ? ? ? it is unclear to me. (to be continued) .........
Thank you dear poet commenting on and criticizing the poem, Here anyone refers any person observing and enjoying spring, again Bees and butterflies will attract the observers to draw attention to the beauty of spring
Spring is practically live here, what a description with rhymes and rhythm just heart touching, congrats
On spring it is a very touching poem, I love it for it artful pattern, thanks poet
It seems a live telecast of spring form a countryside.... great in effect though poor in form. Special thankhs for the eyesoothing photo enclosed.
Amazing poem on spring when- 'Cute is every mole and hill'. Thanks.
I thought it might be an ordinary poem, but now it is an extraordinary and great poem, thanks and conrgats for this great poem
Green and golden fields soften mind as we hear singing birds and dancing grass. Revisiting your poem brings spring in mind blows wind of spring. A nice poem is beautifully penned.
Hi! Poet, your poem is so great, love it, congratulation for day's poem
A Beautiful poem. Spring bloomed here romantically, may be artistically painted with lovely words. Congratulations on member poem of the day!
Wow! ! We are lucky to have chance to red so a lovely spring and poem poem which excells our visiting. It will encourage us to visit more frequently
This is a real spring poem I have ever read with much descriptions, my congratulations on this poem and you, i will vote + 10, thank you
In spring every year I come here Where my roots call me, ‘come dear' To observe, taste and hear It is spring, all good unite together., ..... touching stanza