Tuesday, May 22, 2007

Spring (Haiku) Comments

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Don’t cry, don’t cry please,
Suns shining flowers blooming,
Life’s worth living now.
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David Barlow
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Chris Mendros 14 March 2008

Amen, Mr. Barlow, and it's been a long time coming.

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A beautiful little Haiku, The clouds have parted, darkness faded, spring is here. Live life.

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Elysabeth Faslund 25 July 2007

Beautiful Haiku! Are you saying this to someone who has gone through despair? To me, at least, it sounds like you are. Because you certainly wouldn't be telling winter not to cry. A good poem here! To be read, reread! ! ! xxElysabeth

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Marci Made 13 June 2007

This is so very pretty David and touching as well....Though about to or at least trying to pour here at the moment it has been a sunny day....I think you mean we should feel 'UP' in our hearts.... I will remember this when tears flow....thanks, marci.m.xo

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David Barlow

David Barlow

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