From my debut book "Fleeting Moments: haiku on nature"
pinkish blooms quiver
in spring's light drizzle; green grass
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another nice image, nicely observed and vivid, bipasha. something to consider—since it's spring, and we wouldn't expect it to be otherwise, green may be an unnecessary word. -glen
Hi Bipasha, Marvellous haiku. Haiku's special features are that, the first line or two speaks about weather, climate or environment and the third one, relates this statement to human nature, very subtly. This expression of relationship need not be explicit. Your line, : Green grass glistens on the ground: : says it all. That it why I loved it. A 100 to you..
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