Thursday, August 24, 2017

Spring Green Eyes Comments

Rating: 4.9

An ordinary day
of nothing to be afraid.
He walked in with confidence
but it all dissipated when he saw her.
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Alvaro Minor
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Naila Rais 03 December 2018

Loved it....... Charming to read.........10..... You may like to read my poems too.... Naila

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Akhtar Jawad 26 August 2017

Love of a beautiful friend can change a life. A very impressive poem.

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Alvaro Minor 26 August 2017

for sure. It really gets you thinking that perhaps some people are meant for you to meet

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Jazib Kamalvi 25 August 2017

A nice poetic imagination, Alvaro. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Anton Tolehurst 24 August 2017

A poem with some honesty.

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Alvaro Minor 26 August 2017

Thank you very much Anton. I tried to be as honest as possible and at the same time being careful to not exaggerate too much but not belittle it either; but I am glad to hear it worked out.

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