Spring Forward Comments
May has come; a broken spring
Fractured girl, broken wings
Test the spring; spring failure
Spring mess, may I change here?
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A beautiful poem with a nice flow and very well crafted on spring. 'I murdered the disease I murdered the addiction I murdered both of these Things. Dead.'..is so very touching.Thanks for sharing.10+++
A beautiful poem with a nice flow and very well crafted on spring. 'I murdered the disease I murdered the addiction I murdered both of these Things. Dead.'..is so very touching. Liked it. Thanks for sharing.10+++
amazing poem is very intelligently coined or penned only the other day I was in Niagara how I wish i knew I'd loved to have met you Kindly read my poems two Moms Smiles and Mother's Day Today u'd love these and many more if these two can you allure thanks ere more
Thx for the kind words! Niagara is my hometown, but I don't actually live there now. :) I appreciate the feedback and will peruse your own. Xx NDS
A broken spring is witnessed as May has arrived. An amazing poem is very brilliantly penned.10
Thx for the lovely comments, I am so thrilled you enjoyed it. Best, NDS
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Beauvoir girl, evolution Spring forward in the revolution Fractured wings, but brand new Springs..i murdered all that was bad in my life.. very nice poem with a noble philosophy. lovely. tony
Thx so much for your priceless feedback! I am always grateful. Xx NDS