Wednesday, April 13, 2016

Spring Fools Comments

Rating: 5.0

Some lovers are fools for many reasons
Their love changes colors with changing seasons
He fell in love with her in spring
By summer he was on his knees holding the ring
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Ayman Parray
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Kelly Kurt 13 April 2016

To all, love is a neuro-physiological instinct among life forms to propagate the species and is beyond total control. To others, it is also a game.

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Nosheen Irfan 13 April 2016

Love is a seasonal thing for many people. It's good that you have put this fact in a light-hearted way. The humorous tone of the poem makes it very readable.

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Ayman Parray 20 April 2016

I am truly delighted you liked the poem my dear friend, Nosheen.

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