Sunday, March 6, 2016

Spring Flowers' Waiting Comments

Rating: 4.8

Today, i collected bags of spring flowers
For your winter letters
Carefully i picked, the fallen petals
Full of morning's fragrant arousal
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Anne Yun
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Cigeng Zhang 18 March 2016

For your winter letters I also collected these spring tears A good write. I see the beauty in your poetic spring.

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Connor Whyte 09 March 2016

I find beauty in your words more then the flowers that bloom even when the outside looks sad and gloom your words will light any dark and scary room. Keep it up! I love it.

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Otradom Pelogo 07 March 2016

I love the story of facing a diverse future; preparing for what its winter brings. It flows even more beautifully. Will definitely read more. And of course, thanks for the great response on Rita's Song... Winter does bring us many things to cherish O. P.

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Anne Yun 07 March 2016

diversity and uncertainty, the coming future, worth every second's waiting and preparing. i really like your writings, especially that delicacy

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Wayne Kingston 06 March 2016

Images burst clear, clean. Well done. Like this very much; flowers... tears = solid transition. 😀

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Anne Yun 06 March 2016

thanks a lot, i just start trying, and your words really encourage me

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Dr Antony Theodore 06 March 2016

Carefully i picked, the fallen petals Full of morning's fragrant arousal.. hat a beautiful depiction... carefully i picked the fallen petals... full of morning's fragrant arousal.... romanticism in pure form .. then at the end. i also collect these tears........ tears, spring, spring... tears.... just wonderfully poetic. you have imaginations. they are heavenly. thank you. tony

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Anne Yun 07 March 2016

life needs poetic, or else, it just chaos. i am thinking that you must lead a life as beautiful as your poems. thank you. Anne

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