Tuesday, September 10, 2013

Spring Dance Comments

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They cut all the leaves
all my buds and branches
she set me aside, so not to
rise but to die
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Unwritten Soul 04 November 2013

The can cut leaves, bud, shoot but whatever..but as much as you can be strong as the root..all can be regrown again...time will tell how you can grown as bigger tree than what cutter can expect! _Soul

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Beach Girl 26 September 2013

I think this poem is about the ability of the human spirit to 'bounce back' from a broken heart and love again? I love the way you express yourself. Lovely poem!

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Bri Edwards 10 September 2013

there seems to be more going on here than just a Spring Dance. so i don't completely understand and there are, i think, some misspellings etc. but i like it. is this poem about new plant life growing in the place of plants which have been cut and burned? ? ? thanks for sharing.

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