Saturday, October 5, 2019

Spring Bride, Me Groom Comments

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Spring entered my room
And filled me with its perfume,
To spring's bride I felt like groom.
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 05 October 2019

What a wonderful description of spring. A unique thought. So cleverly written.

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Aniruddha Pathak 05 October 2019

Thanks for some good words, more for reading and finding it fine.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 05 October 2019

LOVELY YOU CONVEY A DESIRE TO MARRY MAY YE AFTER WINTER SPRING WILL COME NEXT YEAR SIR DO WAIT PLEASE NO NEED TO HURRY ALL MONSOONS ARE CHANGING HERE IN AUTUMN ITS SNOWING GREEN LEAVES ARE SMILING

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Aniruddha Pathak 05 October 2019

Know PP to throw stones in quietly musing waters. But any feedback is good enough. At least there is no indifference. Thank you.

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Edward Kofi Louis 05 October 2019

Broom of love and life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Aniruddha Pathak 05 October 2019

Thanks for reading this Haiku

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