Thursday, April 30, 2009

Spring Break Comments

Rating: 5.0

The lazy time of spring break
Is here and just in time
Kids and teachers alike
Are more than ready, I find
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Marilyn Lott
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Kesav Easwaran 30 April 2009

Beautiful 'spring eve' imageries Marilyn...the third stanza lines i liked most in this lovely write...how natural they read! 10

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Stephen Stirk 30 April 2009

Lovely poem about spring break. We've got one coming up next monday. The May bank holiday. I can't wait. The only problem is, they are over too soon. Much enjoyed the read Steve

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Marilyn Lott

Marilyn Lott

Washington state USA
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