Monday, September 30, 2019

Spring As A Flower Comments

Rating: 5.0

The trunk of the tree may be wrinkled ugly with scars
The lonely bench on that I used to sit with someone,
Humans are affected by their hates and busy in wars,
The bench is waiting to give room for love to anyone.
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COMMENTS
Rose Marie Juan-austin 01 October 2019

A poem of love, friendship, care and peace. Very inspiring and very touching. Beautifully crafted and well thought write.

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Khalida Bano Ali 01 October 2019

A wonderful inspiration resulting in a nice poem.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 01 October 2019

A well crafted lovely poem, sir Akhtar....10++

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Akhtar Jawad

Akhtar Jawad

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