Saturday, March 14, 2009

Spring And Rain Dancing Together Comments

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Spring has sprung
As I hear the pitter patters of rain
And the aroma of my lovely roses
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Jackie Thielman
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Jay P. Narain 03 May 2009

The spring rain feels fifferent to different people in different mood. I was observing rain fall on roses and wrote a poem on spring rain. I have little pessimistic outlook. I love your joy in the poem. Good work.

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