Today the night seems to be a burden
In a mood of bitter reflection
Troubled by an unknown venture
And bewildered by nature of ‘Nature’
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You have beautifully expressed why Autumn is preferable to Spring in your poem. Thanks for sharing.
this takes you to the line of Hopkins and other classic poet........remember hopkins 'Spring and Fall' a good one....
Hi Vaibhav well come to poemhunter. thanks for sending your comments on my poem. i really appreciate. i read your poem it is good, but always remember if there was no insentive and motivation we would all have died. life is made up of pains and gains, otherwise we wouldn't have appreciated the gains. take care seema
now this is called the way one looks at the thinfs... u did a good job by looking at autumn soo beautifully.... so many had written about spring(including me) but very few on autumn... good work! !