Spring Again Comments

Your refrain of TWO FRIENDS. IT'S SPRING AGAIN. is exactly right! It states the very heart of the poem with almost unobtrusive insistence. The colors are wonderful especially in the first stanza the YELLOW DAY which stayed with me for the whole poem as well it should, because as Robert Frost reminded us, NATURE'S FIRST GREEN IS YELLOW (!) . The way you incorporate human emotions is deft, this is all stemming from the positive energy of the season, so it seems as natural - and inevitable - as the eventual arrival of spring. What a lovely poem! ! (I am working on a Spring Poem, I am determined to make one, my imagination knows I MEAN it!)

I gotta ask, did you really mean fiend in the last verse? It caught me off guard! Great either way! ! !

THAT poem is so peaceful, your poem is beauitful thank you for sharing on Poem Hunter.Susan Wall

saying beautiful would be inadequate for this amazing write.

a lovely positive spring feeling! thank you for comment on Contrasting Realities

A lovely poem with nice rhythm and rhyme.

Is that sparrow who dance on the grass or is it flower who spray the scent in the wind...but sure i know spring is here when your words color the paper. Nice work Susan_Soul

Beautiful poetry. Such wonderful rhymes. I love the Spring and the joy it brings.

Another great write by Susan! This brings to mind times I've spend with one of my best friends whose name is also Susan! Couldn't wait to take rides with the windows down and sing and sing and sing! Lol. Thanks for bringing back some great memories!

A beautiful write ma'am