Monday, April 1, 2019

Spring Comments

Rating: 4.6

I am clinging to my life
like the last
leaf
clings to the twig
...
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Birbal Singh
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Dr Antony Theodore 16 July 2019

like the last leaf clings to the twig fighting fierce west winds... very fine example and a noble theme. thank u dear poet. tony

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C F 23 April 2019

A verse that goes deeper than what appears on first reading, a wish to survive even just for the next precious moment.10+

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Jagdish Singh Ramána 12 April 2019

A beautiful conciet!

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Jagdish Singh Ramána 12 April 2019

a very beautiful poem! a beutiful imagery! " But for just another glimpse Of coming spring." - a very beautiful answer.

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Jazib Kamalvi 11 April 2019

A refined poetic imagination, Birbal Singh. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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