Monday, April 30, 2018

Spring Comments

Rating: 5.0

Spring arrives in typical bipolar fashion
With a warm hug and then a chilly rebuff
Like a gasp of love then a sigh of despair
Every flower lives under threat of a freeze
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COMMENTS
Tirupathi Chandrupatla 13 August 2019

Delightful poem observing the other sides of spring. Spring is welcome with all its sides.

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Jazib Kamalvi 12 August 2019

A refined poetic imagination, Kevin Scanlon. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Kevin Scanlon 13 August 2019

Thank you, very much Jazib!

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Robert Murray Smith 30 April 2018

Kevin, an excellent write.+++1 Robert

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Kevin Scanlon 01 May 2018

Thanks Robert! I read an essay written in 1997 about spring that contained a phrase describing it as A gasp of first love and decided to steal it for my poem. Bob Dylan does much worse. lol.

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