Tuesday, January 19, 2016

Spring Comments

Rating: 4.3

Flowers and sorrows, arise gloom and die
Seasons how can they twist knife in the cut
A full summer died in my arms but the spring
When freezing bough of months came back to alive
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Aabid Masroor
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Anil Kumar Panda 20 March 2017

Yeah, seasons come and go but Spring brings with it lots of freshness and beauty. Nice poem and congrats.

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Clarence Prince 20 March 2017

With open arms we'll welcome back the spring!

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Rajnish Manga 20 March 2017

What a beautiful poem. Absolute delight. The cycle of seasons has so much to teach us. And spring smiled to me, said Cuts and wounds bind within days Dark of December is not with you always

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Unwritten Soul 20 March 2017

Beautiful, and congrats of being chosen as poem of the day by member! many poems to go now..keep sharing the thought Aabid

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Geetha Jayakumar 20 March 2017

Seasons smiles and fall off in time. Beautiful write. Congrats on member poem of the day!

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Lantz Pierre 20 March 2017

Right in the center: sing a single song Those tones are rare left with few Dew drops on my face A perfect haiku. Sometimes less is more.

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Tom Allport 20 March 2017

a poem of belief and hope that springs eternal? well penned!

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Edward Kofi Louis 20 March 2017

Come Back! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 20 March 2017

Dew drops on my face.... congrats on being picked...

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 01 February 2016

Verily, phases of life, joy and sorrow change as seasons of a year

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Nosheen Irfan 19 January 2016

Rich in imagery. Seasons affect the mood of a person. Flowers and sorrows both are temporary. well penned.

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Aabid Masroor 21 January 2016

thanks

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