Tuesday, June 3, 2014

Spring Comments

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How nice is the smell of this spring,
and lovely birds come together to sing,
people have fun to water their plants,
and kids play around with some toys in their hands.
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Andreas Derksen
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Colleen Courtney 06 June 2014

A very hopeful and happy poem about the season of new beginnings! Wonderful imagery!

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Lenny Camacho 03 June 2014

I really like this poem... the rhythm almost never breaks... good job

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