Friday, February 4, 2005

Spring Comments

Rating: 4.2

Flowers are on their way to bloom
Birds do twitter in the sky
You see
The sea &
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Eman Elbadawi
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Lovely little ode to spring. Or is it love?

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That tipsy twirling feeling when one is in love.Wonderful poem!

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Passionate feelings evoked by the birth of spring

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Howard Savage 08 February 2016

Great poem that deals with awareness, and a touch of the metaphysical

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 20 February 2015

Being hopeful is what is essential for the drive and the drive keeps love going. Short and sweet. Beautifully worded. Poem deserves it's positioning.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 20 February 2015

Love is the essence of life And I am on my way to you! ...marvelous

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Jm T 21 February 2014

simply lovely. it's beauty is in its delivery of encapsulating the complexity of its essence simply.

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Jasbir Chatterjee 21 February 2014

good read...sounds something like the very cliched one, Roses are red, violets are blue, and my love for you will always be true.

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Karen Sinclair 20 February 2014

A charming write suggesting the relevance of spring to a new love.

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Soulful Heart 20 February 2014

A simple path to the essential truth..... a destination that every soul craves for.....

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Michael Morgan 20 February 2013

a successful illustration of an idea. Wonderful brevity. MM

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Manonton Dalan 20 February 2013

fruiting season, hurry come spring. it's so cold everyday.

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Gajanan Mishra 20 February 2012

Very good poem Eman Elbadawi, Congratulation. I invite you to read my poem.

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Afzal Shauq 21 October 2009

Flowers are on their way to bloom Birds do twitter in the sky You see The sea & The sky Are blue Love is the essence of life And I am on my way to you! really a good and inspiring poem with rich logic and them..appreciate it 10/10

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Aashish Ameya 24 March 2006

on the path of beloved one spring takes place inside me...good one Eman

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Peter A. Crowther 31 October 2005

This is a charming little poem that captures the essence of spring

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