Thursday, October 27, 2011

Spring Comments

Rating: 4.8

Blossomed flowers of her smile
Brought a spring to heart,
The impalpable humming of beat
Whispered to my soul
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VIPINS PUTHOORAN
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Smoky Hoss 26 December 2011

Very pretty poetry here.

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 20 December 2011

You are over ambitious. Good.

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Sajna Kailas 05 November 2011

beautiful love poem.like its sounds. nice to read it! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Brian Skyers 01 November 2011

Have found a few poems which are fine to me. This one says 'me ' and 'my'. I will check others and let you know.

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Eric Cockrell 29 October 2011

i believe you have immersed yourself in the river of love! good poetry!

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Hans Vr 29 October 2011

Very nice romantic poem, Vipins.

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Dead Leaf 28 October 2011

i don't know what to say..........i love this poem. you are great.. words are executed beautifully.

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Richard McClellan 28 October 2011

Winter is not here and I am already longing for spring... Thanks Vipins! ! !

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I love this poem... It is short and sweet. perfect

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Jacqui Broad 27 October 2011

Sounds sweet. Drinking the nectar of flowers and eating the honey of bees. Lovely poem, as always.. :)

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Unwritten Soul 27 October 2011

Gorgeous scenery there :) you twist the flowers into words very well...The new poems from you really different, as they have more smiles and happiness inside...but all your poems undeniable, good :) just when there's addition of happiness it create more joy feelings...keep writing and make it beautiful :) Unwritten Soul

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Harindhar Reddy 27 October 2011

'Blossomed flowers of her smile, Brought me a spring in my heart, Where impalpable humming of beat, ' It is perfect start to this lucid poem. I thoroughly enjoyed the poem. I feel scintillating to read this marvelous romantic poem. Romanticism displayed here made me to recant Love poems of John Keats. Two hands up - One went to appreciate the poem and one more goes to pat the shoulder of the genius in the poet. Keep scaling the ladder of time by few more poems like this amigo! With my best wishes....

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