Thursday, May 19, 2005

Spring Comments

Rating: 3.3

It comes after the winters,
With it’s own joy and flora.
The little flowers bloom with happiness,
And spread their wonderful fragrance.
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PREETS...APOETESS AT 12...WHAT AN ACHIEVEMENT...TIS ONLY GOES TO PROVE MY CLAIM THAT YOU HAVE THE GIFT! 10! FRANK

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Aashish Ameya 03 October 2005

I like beginning of this poem. but at last i somewhere lost interest.... it should conclude something more meaning full. any way good attempt.... smiles Aashish

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