Monday, September 22, 2008

Spring Comments

Rating: 5.0

When Nature dresses itself in perfect beauty then it's Spring,
Here people's hearts hear a new ring;
Under the canopy of trees with dark leaves,
A sigh of relief a lover heaves;
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koyel mitra
COMMENTS
Ahmad Shiddiqi 23 December 2008

Lovely! keep writing! Dear, friend. Would you like to read and comment on my newest poem, Lost Forest's Ancient Chant, Terrace of Violence, Hymn To Star, Hymn To Sun, Cascades of Caprices, Fountain of Fearless Fiance, Children Song, Valley of Heart, Mata Hari, Song To Society, Visibly, etc.please? Thank you very much.

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Rakhi Jayashankar 01 October 2008

kool poem a 10 for the poem and a 10 for the rhyme

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Edgar Andrade Baguio 27 September 2008

Well, nice rhymes....cool spring descriptions....

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Joseph Poewhit 26 September 2008

A very pretty poem filled with emotions

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Paolo Giuseppe Mazzarello 26 September 2008

And now waiting for springtime I can read this delicate 'Spring', written with bucolic inspiration in Virgil style.

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David Desantis 26 September 2008

very beautiful and refreshing poem koyel...i haven't been on here in a while, but its really cool to see some great talent...i like the allusion to nature dressing itself

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Reetessh Sabrr 26 September 2008

words cease beauty rules!

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 25 September 2008

The spring of joy conveyed in the best possible way! !

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Seema Chowdhury 25 September 2008

well done. excllent expression.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 24 September 2008

Reading it I felt the spring, lovely composition.10++

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 24 September 2008

so beautiful....very good 10

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Anjali Sinha 24 September 2008

scenic beauty in spring displayed nicely as if on canvas. full 10+ love anju

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Deepti Agarwal 24 September 2008

yr work has definately captured r heart.. :) with good rhyming sceme...n lovely picture... :)

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Shannon D Smith 23 September 2008

I that was a great poem! ! +10

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Sarwar Chowdhury 23 September 2008

while I see the spring is next, My mind start- oh spring! oh dear come! fine expression koyel! ++++10 khub chamatkar bhashar bunon hoyechhe!

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premji premji 23 September 2008

i wish your life is spring always...

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Lynda Robson 23 September 2008

Spring is a lovely time of year and I think you have captured that in your poem, well written, 10 Lynda xx

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Kesav Easwaran 23 September 2008

a poem on the sweet feels that spring up along with the thought of spring...good piece...good idea behind the write...10

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Tom Balch 23 September 2008

Spring the loveliest of seasons,10 regards Tom

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even in the unevenness of autmn nature shines through... but spring...

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