Thursday, March 15, 2007

Spring Comments

Rating: 5.0

Shiver shiver in the cold
Who is that standing out there bold

Primrose, Bluebell,
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Howard Johnson
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Jolenish Fiber 03 July 2008

hi howard! very beautiful vivid description. liked how you twisted the last stanza from the first, and flowed along brilliantly. i love laying down in the grass

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Tsira Goge 18 May 2008

It is very melodious poems and as live picturesque, it was pleasant to me to read, Howard. ........10............ Tsira

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Latasha Dixon 13 May 2008

Nicely written, so where do you live somewhere up north i would guess

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Duncan Wyllie 19 March 2007

YES! this one hits all the right notes with me.. It reminded me so much of the song 'TALKING LOUD AND CLEAR' by OMD Melting the adhesive hold Luquifying the icy cold Winters grip is no longer bold Greenery and flowers It will bring Birds in the trees giving you their sing Great writing Thankyou for sharing your art Love duncan x

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Dee Daffodil 16 March 2007

Howard...What a lovely poem! ! ! I just wish SSSSSpring was a little closer...I'm expecting another 10-15 cms of the white stuff to be dumped upon my head! ! Hugs, Dee

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Patricia Gale 15 March 2007

Delightful spring time piece Howard

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