~spring Comments

Such a delightful verse and my pleasure to read...You brought spring to life! Dorothy Alves Holmes A Poet Who Loves To Sing

Entirely Spring, Dear Adeline! With greenery, hopes and laughter all springing into life anew! Spring is not just a season, but rather an emotion and you captured it so well!

What a beautifully lyric poem which paints a word picture so vivid you can see it in your minds eye If I could write just one poem as good as this I would feel blest. Paul P.S. Thanks for taking the time to read my poor offerings XX: 0) Paul

I enjoyed the metering of your poem, very rhythmic and graceful. i also found in each line an unexpected but delightful surprise as you moved toward the arrival of Spring. very nice work.

A lovely remarkable poem, bookmarked.

I love the way this poem gathers momentum in the last third of its lines, rolls downhill in a tumble of playful rhythms and bursts a last into the celebration of spring. Yes, I do like it very much, Adeline.