Saturday, October 14, 2017

Spreading Your Golden Wings Comments

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For visiting this city by tearing dawn,
Spreading wings of golden colour,
You are entering into heart of Earth,
Birth of yours is seen in boon soon.
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Kumarmani Mahakul
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 26 January 2019

power of an earth and source of an energy... beautiful...10

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Akhtar Jawad 14 October 2017

Let us spread our golden wings of love and peace to reflect and spread the light of wisom that is sure and definite to come after a dark and troubled night. Let us pray the day to come will be bright. Spirituality is Mhakul Ji's property but let us steal some of it from him, it's something that increases when some of it is stolen.

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Susan Williams 14 October 2017

dawn, Spreading wings of golden colour, - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -What a vibrant vivid metaphor for how the dawning light spreads across the horizon announcing another day that we pray will have such beauty and nurture and love in it for all. Very very beautiful poem.10++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Edward Kofi Louis 14 October 2017

Golden Age! ! Thanks for sharing.

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Chris Embrick 14 October 2017

All living things await the beauty and life giving of the sun each morning. Nature provides golden images, a treasure for us each dawn. Beautiful portrayal of sunrise. Thanks dear friend.

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Muzahidul Reza 14 October 2017

For establishing light you come here. fantastic write, thank you for sharing the poem with us here,10

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